Too long I have lived in this world,
With meaningless lies and destruction,
A world in which I am broken beyond repair.
Yet it seems time will not avail,
For I hate life itself without fail,
And each time I make myself carry on,
Death passes around me,
It’s much longed song.
I hate life for it will not release me,
I hate death for it will not embrace me.
Author notes
I hate life for it will not release me
I hate death for it will not embrace me. – Midian
Superman is my hero (seriously) 
A contest entry
- Picture, Word Bank, Quote OH MY!: Pick a Prompt for a Dark Write! by Concrete Angel.
1050 points, ended November 20, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Stunning. Tale of a life I'm living! Release in embrace?! Ah, I hope ya live and find someone to wrap your arms are and orgasm your emotions with! Best of luck! And uh hope I die first, uh
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LOL @ your AN I like the little (seriously) thrown in there... my fiancee would love it because he seriously is his hero lol. Anyway, now on to the poem
I really liked this with its feel of forlorn frustration. I think there are many people out there who would share these sentiments exactly. I erally like what you did with the prompt and that the qouet is incorporated into the poem, especially since you ended the poem with it. That was a fanatstic move! lol. This flowed along smoothly just rolling off the tongue when I read it out loud. Fantastic write! Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest! -
awesome
this is a great poem and well written....you took the prompt
and wrote something great from it...
usualy i pic a bit and copy it into my comment to show my fav bit
but i dnt have to with this poem coz its all awesome..
well done and good luck to you in z contest
Jayde
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