My heart turns ice when our eyes meet.
I’m burning to tell what I feel.
All words vanish as my heart beat.
How do I share with you my zeal?
I’m burning to tell what I feel.
Butterflies have infested me.
But this feeling I must conceal…
and with you I just need to be!
All words vanish as my heart beat.
I’ll write these words for you to see,
your breath just makes me feel complete.
You are just so perfect for me!
How do I share with you my zeal?
I need your love to make me whole.
In all due time the truth reveal…
You are my life, you are my soul.
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Contest entry:
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A contest entry
- Butterflies and Silence by Wynd Arc.
900 points, ended November 6, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yay for the shiny trophy and it's well deserved. This Retourne is a joy to recite aloud. Bravo!
love,
Amera
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I never even saw it till you said so!!
YEANESS!!! My day was just made!! Thank you for your comment and for being such a great teacher!
Love you sooooooo much
Becks
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You do so well with this method.Very beautiful poem.. I can feel your emotions within it.Great imagery as well..Wonderfull thought and word expression throughout..Congrats..I loved it
Jonn
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Oh wow..
what a beautiful piece! and one of my favorite forms too! a retourne..wow..i love this lady, and i'm happy for you seem to be happy..good for you! excellent work my friend..
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This is exactly what's happening to me at this very crucial moment in my life. I can feel how the words describe what is happening and the pure emotion of the write itself is very strong. I really enjoyed reading this and I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
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What a wonderful poem!
You are such a pro when it comes to Retourne
Well done my friend and best of luck to you in the contest
All my love
Sonya
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