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digit's foretell the stab of foreplay's finality


within the crush of naked flesh,
I reach to bring her saturation-
firm fingers fondle
feeling to enrapture the scent of penetration

so velvet flesh parts,
invigorating the hold
of primal hearts
and a woman's moisture seeps exhilaration;

rhythm builds this insurrection,
deeper they plunge,
deeper their attention

my hands have tasted,
now my tongue
excruciates a flavoursome detection
stroking soft the taste
in pains that pleasure her direction;

I swallow folds
that shudder spasms
bringing her to eclipse
the waning of righteous inhibition;

then I climb to plunder
to pillage
to delve within her present of perfection-

these thrusts explore fathoms of urgency
as she engulfs my length
to impale the ache of resurrection

so we scream orgasm
amidst streams that signal height

that signal fulfillment's fated celebration.

 

 

 

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 26
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    how the hell did I miss this?

    'grats on the Honourable Mention (should have gotten Gold though).

    Stunning, sensual, deep (no pun intended) and delicious


  • Mango Memories
    November 26
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  • ScarletO gold member
    November 15
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    I cannot believe this only won HM. My gosh, I could not even attempt to read the others after reading this one. I believe I like these lines the best which seem to give this reader imagery unwired. then I climb to plunder
    to pillage
    to delve within her present of perfection-


  • Desire gold member
    November 8

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    Wow~

    Oh My~ You have delivered a feast for the eyes my Friend
    and also Adore the way You weaved this one too~
    Oy!
    I swallow folds...
    Holy Canole~
    Words just roll off the tongue~
    Bravo!!
    Monitor melted...No biggy
    Hot Stuff You have spoken
    Congratulations on Your HM
    Woot~ Yay!!

    Keep that quill dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in all You do~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 5

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    Rob you are the master of Sensual arousal,
    dang it man!! I love it when you writes these
    yup going into my bag of goodies

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 5

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    Whooaaa is this steamy or what?!?!?!?
    I would say this would DEFINITELY leave someone shivering in delight!
    Thank you so much for sharing and for being part of the contest; the best of luck to you!


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 5

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    well that pretty much says it all, doesn't it? now if you'll excuse me, it's shower time...lol.... hugggs rob....


  • stef-witt gold member
    November 5
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    Wowsers


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    November 5

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    not bad.

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