The new
Citroen Cinquain
A brand new car for man
Bought for the price of a new house
Or tan
A contest entry
- Cinquaintly Fall by azure85.
1100 points, ended November 7, 28 entries
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What did you think
Comments
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well they are wonderful cars, or at least the ride is super smooth, but here you bring a bite of satire and inject some humor, very refreshing for this form...PK

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This made me laugh, and imagine the great fall colors they will preview it with when it comes out soon! Thank you so much for your cinquain.


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I think this is okay, I wrote a Haiku about Japanese drivers recently and whilst doing that was trying to think through a cinquain as well, hope this fits, I know its not Autumnal but I'd rather every day was summer anyway.





