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Michael ( Bronze )

 

Curve sweet my rose for I shall unfurl beauty

 

 

like no other..

Your scent musks freely  in breeze captured only for I

to taste.

It flows upon mountain ridge

cascade into rivers of my mind

as Oceans touch

we are embedded by the twine.

Lesser not this life

for journey came

as destiny faced ageless

we encounter brief

the harmony voiced

expressed in ink...

 

for you

I share a moment.

 

 

Author notes

 

 

"Hyperbolic~This heart nestled in a place among the stones".

 

For you Michael..

with fondess wishes

x

 

"Pebble" by Dirk Hampel.

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  • michael thomas gold member
    November 23
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    Julie
    I am very head down humble by your gift. Thank you.


  • Blue Rew silver member
    November 23
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    This is a song perfumed in such rich glow,
    I felt whisked upon that same breeze~
    the one that whispers of mesmerizing words
    between lovers. Blue

    PS~cascade should be plural per the context.


  • penman gold member
    November 11

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    Excellent

    What a terrific write. So very uplifting and a great tribute. Best of luck in the contest

  • michael thomas gold member
    November 6
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    Julie (If I may call you that)
    Juliet (If I may dream of you that)
    Julieta of the "you betcha" she's a breeze of a squeeze
    and when she wraps herself around me
    I feel that true love has found me
    in the manner of a Reptile Lady Boa
    taking the last bit of toothpaste out of the tube
    getting her money's worth from the Colgate Peppermint
    Almighty Whitener with 20 percent more added fluoride
    taking me for the most dizziest of any ever kind of ride
    make any other man put himself in a dark closet to hide
    thank you, Julie, for adding 20 percent more to my pride




  • Nevel
    November 5

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    This is wonderful done, Julie...Such a flow with a deep message into it. Gentle and subtile...Great

    Erwin


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 5

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    Awesome write about a poet I have heard of but not yet read...Now, I feel I must have a peek...Such a tribute to him....He will be very pleased! sis

    • michael thomas gold member
      November 5
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      an angel is an angel
      a rose is a rose
      by any other name
      an angel would be a rose
      and a rose be an angel

      rarely can we find a
      purple carrot
      or a carrot purple
      but if we did
      we would have
      rabbits we could
      not find in the
      purple sky

      a heart is a heart
      by any other name
      it would be a soul
      or a soul heart
      and when we
      connect to another
      heart we would reach
      their soul destination
      this is the determination
      of each soul heart:
      to become a rose angel

      heaven be so blessed
      I would want no less
      can you guess
      my name is:
      angel heart
      with a purple nose
      that glows
      from one too many
      funny cigarettes

      There, now you have met me, Rose Angel
      I look forward to meeting you
      will you give me permission to add you as a favorite?
      I would be honored if you did the same: adding me as a favorite.

      michael


  • Deaths Prayer
    November 5

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    That was very beautiful

    You hit the nail with what you where doing...i love the style and fonts

    Good luck in the contest i hope you win!!

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