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over easy

a single chip, not enough
then the webbing
fracture, the second
smack upon the counter
top

breaking the first egg
still hot, a seared shut crack
along the length
assumed to be
hard boiled yet not quite
knowing
my wrist more comfortable
with the way
michael also seemed unsure of the weight
moving inside the perfectly white thing
how hard to press
in examination
yet not conjure
the yolk
bright proof of our naivete
to the tile floor

my thumbs split the skin
heard air
whistle in his through
his teeth

they were done
yellow kernel
firm
in redemption

regrettably edible
could have been
a terrific mess
  something to applaud and walk away from
without dabbing at

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  • acoustical
    November 5

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    me too! lovin' eggs, that is.
    i like mine over easy, with toast to mop it up. i miss making myself eggs.

    i like your food poem. i don't think i've read a food poem of yours.


  • sixtimesseven
    November 5
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    i love eggs!