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Night Dancing

I'm dancing round a fire, all I can see is the flame, all I feel is the darkness.
Laugh, I beg myself laugh,and I laugh.
I can not hold on any longer, before I can breath, I am spinning
Out of control, into the night.
The trees whisper for me to join the dance,
in the dark that awaits behind the flurecent gates.
I am one with the Moon and the Stars.
In my flowy dress as black as the sky.
And the dark seems to laugh with me, and dance as my partner,
as I fall through all thought, and surrender to the street.
The pavement beneath my bare feet.
I am stolen into the night. By all Hallows Eve.

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  • Tzipora
    November 16
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    nicee write. this was very well written.

    congrats on gold.


  • Silver Wolf
    November 6

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    Love it!

    You did an excellentjob here, I must say. The imagery was awesome, and made me feel as if I were there with ou...wish I was! Fantastic work!