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At the Day's End

I want to be open
painted like a sunrise
in your eyes
I lay into your heart,
all myself in spiritual bliss.
My heart is beyond flesh,
its pressed into you on cold evenings,
sealed between our melted lips
bursting into color with all that I see.
I want to build you a cabin in the woods,
with that kind of natural patchwork love.
My pledge is hidden in stained colors,
shining upon how your love left me,
kneeling at your alter, devoting eternity,
to my sunset I saw in your eyes.
I bloomed in your hands but cried out,
"Where have you been all these ages?"
for I did not know you until now.

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Random writing in my cosey place with my special ladies.

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  • BledKnight
    November 13
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    I missed your poetry.

    I liked it, it couldn't feel anything but passion from it. I got a few new poems too but I dont remember my password X_x haha miss ya.


    • Flo Varekai
      November 16
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      Thankies.

      ^.^ Hey! I haven't heard from you in forever! How are you?

  • blackgoddess
    November 6
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    wow

    so whos the lucky guy? oh and its a beautiful poem i love and miss you


    • Flo Varekai
      November 7
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      LOL

      There still hasn't been a lucky guy. I just kinda wrote this out of nowhere. How are you?