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The taker

Abandon me like I don't mean a thing.
Walk away and leave me feeling the sting.
You don't care, you know it's fine,
That I'll be right here every time.
When you come back and need someone.
You don't care what this has done.

You must think it's fine for me.
That I don't feel, that I don't bleed.
Well guess what sweetheart? I'm broken.
Crushed by the weight of my emotion.
I've wanted to bleed, I've wanted cry.
I've wanted to surender, I've wanted to die.

Did you ask, did you know?
When I had nowhere else to go?
You didn't know how fragile my life,
Or that I could have killed myself tonight.
Or really any other timely date.
Because that's how I've felt as of late.

Instead you've ignored my words and plee,
Some friend you've been to me.
But go ahead and ignor my pain, it's fine,
Because I'll be here every time.
When you come back and need someone.
You don't care what this has done.

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