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Philosophy




You rain;
as shadow shades
like covers of the day
and masking all the scents away -
in vain.




 

 

 

 

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  • Peteskid gold member
    2 days ago
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    I like this, has a mood and some good thoughtful depth. Autumn can be gay or somber, like any seaon or time we can find our feelings in it...very well done...PK


  • azure85 gold member
    November 7

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    An introspective cinquain about the season, which is what autumn is all about as the chill begins in the air around us. Thank you so much for your cinquain.


  • downstairs
    November 7
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    Brilliant.


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    November 5
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    great job with the cinquain


  • Acqua Mossa
    November 5
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    i like it


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 5

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    I dig this.

    Nice form.

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