instead of contrition
give me dances in winter
from the hidden veils,
eyes begging music
in all your languages
if i listen
somewhere
the surface of a star is born
love won't crumble
walled by unseen circumstances
A contest entry
- SHORT ...Points For ... by mysticstorm.
450 points, ended November 6, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Ya think?
Comments
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this is so well written. beautiful imagery and good word choice. i agree with the other comments, your short game is just as good as your long game.
keep on pumping out these beauties!
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Thank you Eric, I do enjoy the brief ones as much as the long ones, so glad you enjoyed this
Chez
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How soft and wonderful...I would love to see that star, myself...
Thank you for entering
mystic
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you do short as well as long
ive always wondered what star in the evening sky
would not only bring that special glow to my eyes
but make me also want to dance
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Awww thank you Mal for a wonderful comment C
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Now this is what I am talking about
flows like a river from your heart!
i wish i had some like this
~sighs~
love to you Chez
Rend
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