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Virtue by the wayside

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She hungered for a pretty
pair of Maryjane's
and a pinafore that fit

A place where all her dreams
were more than just a
distant thought of lore

To be cherished and loved
for more than just
her pretty face and
hour glass figure

Her mind and wit
were sharp like the
double edged sword
she carried

Longing to be free
of the cloy stench
of whore

she put her best foot forward

and walked the path of righteousness

Author notes

Be inspired by.......

the beauty of -e x p r e s s i o n V-

Credit artist: Spiral studios


righteousness: Morally upright; without guilt or sin: In accordance with virtue or morality:

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  • Nom de Plume
    November 24, 2009

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    A womans mind is always the most attractive quality. Really like this, speaks to me of hope and personal power. Thoroughly deserving of it's trophy

  • Tercarro
    November 17, 2009
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    Impressive

    A great story that truely captured the feeling of the picture, I felt your words touch me.
    TC


  • perfectsunset
    November 14, 2009

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    I can relate to this on a personal
    level, it really touched me.
    I love the beauty your words
    seep out, and the candor
    expressed.

    Love it.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

  • Bob Fox
    November 5, 2009

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    jcat

    Perhaps a venture some do get to take after years of street walking. your words prove that we can always seek out remption and another way of life. Great write for the picture dear poet. All the best.