She hungered for a pretty
pair of Maryjane's
and a pinafore that fit
A place where all her dreams
were more than just a
distant thought of lore
To be cherished and loved
for more than just
her pretty face and
hour glass figure
Her mind and wit
were sharp like the
double edged sword
she carried
Longing to be free
of the cloy stench
of whore
she put her best foot forward
and walked the path of righteousness
Author notes
Be inspired by.......
the beauty of -e x p r e s s i o n V-
Credit artist: Spiral studios
righteousness: Morally upright; without guilt or sin: In accordance with virtue or morality:
A contest entry
- Click 70. by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended November 14, 2009, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A womans mind is always the most attractive quality. Really like this, speaks to me of hope and personal power. Thoroughly deserving of it's trophy



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Impressive
A great story that truely captured the feeling of the picture, I felt your words touch me.
TC

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I can relate to this on a personal
level, it really touched me.
I love the beauty your words
seep out, and the candor
expressed.
Love it.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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jcat
Perhaps a venture some do get to take after years of street walking. your words prove that we can always seek out remption and another way of life. Great write for the picture dear poet. All the best.




