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Making The Impossible Possible

I didn't believe
But I wanted to
I wanted every
Word you spoke
But I was afraid
I didn't believe
You truly loved me
So I pushed
And I pretended
But I wanted you
To prove it to me
Just like you said
That you would
I wanted it to last
But I guess
I pushed too hard
I pretended too much
Because as soon
As I gave in
You gave up

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Just me whining, right?

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  • Trapped Destruction
    November 18
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    I do believe that by leaving, I proved it right? Unfortunately, now the impossible has gotten so much harder to make possible. Believe I can find a way though?