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Flu Season

I'm tired of being sick
And I'm sick of being tired
There's a battle-field in my throat
A river in my nose
And I'm sore from head to toes
I'm sleeping away
All of my days
With a cough and cold and sinus

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Bleh

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  • sgking123
    November 6

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    ahaha

    sick of being tired and vice versa...wow ..loved it..a super poem... check I have few rousing ones on my page