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May I kiss you in the darkest night?
Throw my arms around you in the brightest light?
Giving you everything you've dreamed
so tenderly,
with a love you had never before received,
with a kiss & a wink from me.
To sigh through your hair
is what I dream to do,
wondering if I would lose my mind
looking thru the eyes of you,
& into your heart.
Because I couldn't stand knowing
we went from computer screen
& fantasy to something surreal
as real life; no matter even if we're
just friends--
at this moment, you are my fantasy;
when I can feel nothing besides
the want to hold you close to me.
Reading the words softly spoken;
is it hopeless romance you've written of,
or just another waking moment
called-forth the game of love?
To know you're more than just words
& an image;
but to hold the proof within a world
enticed by a kiss.

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Comments

  • yes u may

    i must admit, u surprise me sometimes-scratch that-often with beautiful poems and this is one of those many times


  • Oublie.
    November 10, 2009

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    I like it. A bit different from your usual writings, but still prettiful. (I'd leave a better comment, but I'm listening to your little thing from your page an I'm just laughing to hard. You, my dear, are just...silly. x]) Fantasies are always fun, are they not? Question is, what happens if the fantasy becomes real? Wouldn't it lose the sparkle...the beauty? Or would it be better? Hm. You've got me thinking, yet again.

    But yes, good poem! :]]