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~Taste me~

 

 

 

 

 

Black stilettos and red lipstick

shimmering thighs sway

~Such wicked play….

 

 

 

 

 

Sensations licked

on raging flesh, enticing

whispered moans, on nipples

drenched.

　

 

 

 

 

His name caught in

subtle sighs, in tangled legs,

his heaved replies..

 

 

 

 

 

each

pulsating thrust

gratifies.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Such wicked play…

between wet swollen lips.

came, and came again

without any ...

 

 

  ~inhibitions~

 

 

 

      

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10...Taste Me.

If you leave clappies & Comment
I will return the favor
Thank you for stopping to read,

*´¨)
¸.·´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨)
(¸.·´ (¸.·Rend~

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  • jazzcat gold member
    November 21
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    Amazing write! Congrats on the bronze! This is very, very effective.... I may never be the same!


  • MichaelLeeSmyth
    November 20
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    Gotta love it, red lipstick, high heel stiletto boots, and something sexy for her as well.
    Excellent write here, tasty even.


  • skehy
    November 19
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    Thank you Your writing is quite beautiful as well!


  • whitecoffee
    November 19
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    I need to stop reading these by you...congrats on that bronze


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 18
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    Mmmmmm very tasty I love the flow and the over feeling in this so good. Your words just made me want to mmmm well that is all I will say lol. Thank you for reading another poem of mine always a pleasure SH


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    November 14
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    You sure do have a talent for the sultry and sensual, It's always a pleasure to read your words
    Congratulations on the bronze


  • My Chronos gold member
    November 14
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    I felt this completely...I love your style.

  • mcfreeman
    November 12
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    you can almost...

    hear it, see it , taste it..


  • Debra A Baugh gold member
    November 12
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    You're AweSome

    Rend you write so eloquently.....the sublteness of your sensual word play.....extraordinary in its concept......not making its meanings and the imagery it envokes to the reader misunderstood......many applauds and accolades to such an exceptional poetess......this piece should have been awarded the gold 3x over......standing ovation for your exquisite artform of erotica pleasantly displayed.....meaning and intent never taken out of context.......Kudos......well-written.......LP&H


  • penman gold member
    November 11
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    Excellent

    What a terrific write. so very creative and well written and so very hot. Congrats on the bronze


  • JinSays gold member
    November 11
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    oh I think this should have won gold...
    and then gold again,
    and then maybe one more time just to be on the safe side.
    My goodness this is just....

    wonderful.

    I haven't felt like writing erotic in a long while. You make me want to write it again.

    You've been writing some beautifully sizzling pieces. Exploring this other side of the personality spectrum makes you a stronger individual.

    You learn so much about yourself you never, ever knew.

    Excellent write, beautiful lady.
    love,
    jin


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      November 11
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      coming from you Jin,
      I am humbled you are one of the Top
      Authors on this site that have such a powerful voice
      in Poetry, am trying to not use so many filler words,
      and have it mean something

      thank you so much for your thoughts
      and applauds sss

      love and blessings to you always

      Rend


  • Jon Andoa gold member
    November 10
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    very wicked and enticing piece


  • poetic mairin
    November 9
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    Trying to applaud

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      November 9
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      lol i hate when that happens, and it doesnt
      thank you so much any way i was just on your
      write, going back to read sss

      love and blessings

      Rend

  • poetic mairin
    November 9
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    I agree with lesbianoflove...and because I don't feel like cheating and recopying her words, I'll just say that I would have pretty much have said the same thing. It's very beautiful, and yet sensual and sexual at the same time.


  • heavens HELL
    November 9
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    that was hot and delish!!!!! god the fact that i thot that was beauliful is fritening and wow...just wow!!!


  • LesbianOfLove
    November 9
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    Do u need to be told how awesome this poem is? I mean, really.lol Sensual, Sexy, arousing and playful. I love the format. It's very fun to read, and flows very nicely. Terrific work. Keep writing!


  • The Rivaling Mimic
    November 9
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    Yup. I can't deny that this piece has that power to draw something out n the reader. It's taste is sensual and not overboard. Congratulations!

    The Rivaling Mimic


  • bigperm gold member
    November 9
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    a well deserving winner

    I'm diggin the mood: right into a hot and sultry scenario. I've said it before, but this truly is your niche. You give sensual and seductive a sexy status. Keep workin it.

  • msjuicytech
    November 9
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    ooooo. I like it.. naughty, yet tasteful. ;-) Welldone.


  • Afe-la
    November 9

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    I feel a little inadequate commenting with all the response you seem to get on your poems. But never-the-less. I love the rhyme work and meter in this one. The structure at first hides that, but then compliments it wonderfully.
    And oo If I was a man to blush easily, I would be cherry red right now. What a wonderful image this brings... hehe.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      November 9

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      you pay me too much of a compliment
      its humbling when i read your comments
      thank you so much s

      love and blessings

      Rend

      • Afe-la
        November 9
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        Not true. You are an excellent writer. Fantastically artistic. you make tapestries in the mind from your work. I could never pay you too much of a compliment


  • DraidenGunGiest
    November 9

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    Very nice .

    Erotic , and captivating in so few words ... Makes me relive grand memories , I do enjoy this lass , Very much . Thank you for reminding me of something Good !

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      November 9
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      well thank you Stewie,
      One should never forget what once made them smile
      and for your comment and applauds

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 8

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    stunning  to taste for the game gave way to pleasure and the smile the reward .. a very seductive piece well penned hun Hugs always Angel♥

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