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Neither forgiven nor forgotten

Missing image
in morose thoughts of morbidity
she clung..

hopeless endeavors sprung
forth and forgotten

so simple was her wish...

darkness churns 'neath surface
of redemption

if we deem to hear the dire call

the sighs of sightless wonders
echo through the deep abyss

leaving just a touch of
coyness clinging

to the love that she relinquished

Author notes

the beauty of -e x p r e s s i o n IV-



Credit artist: Lorenzo Sperlonga




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  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 14

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    This read very smooth
    and sentimental;

    I love the images you
    express with such soft
    tones.. your use of
    language is seamless.

    I love this piece!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering