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They spoke in tones of sin

each accounts for
rapid dissipation

in two's they came
until at last the
sole survivor stood

proud and haute'

in awe we stand
so easily we sway

under hypnotic stance

and fall we do....

like dominoes to these
seductive siren calls
 

Author notes

Prompt: "seven towers"


dissipation: An amusement; a diversion.

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  • sgking123 gold member
    November 16
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    wow

    darwin;'s theor...survivor gets all and the natural order remains..looks like we are after all defying this and it is no longera zero sum game.....think it over


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 6

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    A brilliant write that adds the air of sensual to the beauty of words
    Best wishes hun and good luck to you always

    Julie


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 5

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    Very lovely! A creative and deep write with wonderful word choice.

    Thank you for entering!

    mystic