Eyes meet in warm, as lashes flicker
With tender kissing and warm embracing
they explore amour
loosing all in in that moment's stupor
Growth and understanding, wisdom,
envelope them as two mature beings
they grow some more
on their love's ecstatic shores
It's not about just lovemaking and lust
it is much more than average 'must'
but what the heart has in store
augmented on terrace of veins they pulse along.
To find the stars in the eyes of a lover
twinkling in evergrowing brightness
through the mists of sorrow
as it is dispersed and turned into complete bow
When storms rage wild you hold tight
in that heavenly embrace fixing that partner in loving sight
til the break of light brings tomorrow
you are my joy that I bought and did not mere borrow
Allowing the tears to drench your shirt
as mine fall on your bosom that is heaving in more than a flirt
for your shoulder is on borrow
and your bosom nestling in my chest..shall we lest!
It's a gift you find with another sweet soul
a soul that has merged and now in my unending bowl
a completion to you, Mi Amour
bearing the jealous,slighty world's boors,
Inner beauty that you learn over time
is warming us in a partnered picture mime
not just passion and sexual chores
as we rummage ,give and take each other's passion stores
but the promises of a lifetime of pleasure
this is our heaven and not a nether!
enjoying and living togtherness....moments slip by and we get bound more and more!
Author notes
heaven and not a nether!
This is a collaboration poem with poetess PassionsPromise-the scheme reads as follows: poet sgking123 first line and alternate lines thereafter
Poetess PassionsPromise: second line and every alternate line thereafter
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this was such a unique and well written piece
each of your emotion was so well exposed that it made this a pleasure to read. -
this is very good! great flow and perfect timing
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Well now Sarge, how in the world did you ever talk Tory into doing a collab? It is a rare feat indeed to convince her to write with someone. Well done you two... Scott
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This was awesome. Well done weaving the lines together.
You wanted a challenge and then mastered it.
If you would list me as collaborator I too can see comments left
on this, as it was a honor working with you.
Whats next???
s thank you for a lovely piece poet. Sweet and loving.
Passionspromise
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Mmm...nice !!
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this is the most beautiful write i have read in awhile...wow...i am truly blown away...i have tears in my eyes...this sucked me in and i couldnt take my eyes off the words...the second stanza is breathtaking and heartstopping...in other words, it is killer...oh my, dear poets...you are so gifted...you have put things into words in a way i could only dream of...it is mesmerizing...hypnotic and blissful...dont stop...
you are both wonderful.
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