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spiced



aromatic memories
in a fragile cup of you

a mixture of sweet spring days
overflowing orange blossom

nights alight with a medley
of cinnamon flames
and
scents of no regret














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Prompt: cinnamon sticks

30 words

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  • tomisb
    November 5

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    Love the opening two lines. Very strong start to a sweet fragrance of dreams and delights.
    Love,
    Tom B.


  • Malabu
    November 5

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    one could shimmer with the sweet scents of cinnamon here and just a memory of sinful nights comes to me with days long gone by
    still linger is the simmer of hot tea after bedsheets and soft music come with the morning light


  • chinmay
    November 5

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    Very sensual, fires up the desire. Well done and all the best in the contest.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 5
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    awesomenessss

    I likey.


  • Cannonsfire
    November 5

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    Smells wonderful


  • Naridill
    November 5

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    I adore the colour through out this piece.
    Very vivid and fluent.
    Nicely penned.


  • chilali
    November 5

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    scents of no regrets. how lovely! thanks for entering and good luck

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