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Storm Lover

Boughs creaking,
Leaves thrashing,
Whirlwind flurry,
Limbs opening arms
to embrace winds

Thunder cracks
breaking wild black skies,
Lightening enters,
Blinding glares,
Wildlife disappears

Yet here I sit in awe
at the beauty of it all
whipped by long grasses,
A twig snaps scratching my face,
I have no cares

The darkness brings out demons
but are they really there?
With each and every flash
they draw closer, ever near,
It's exhilerating

Take me in this place,
Risk your life and soul,
Danger is a turn on,
Own me,
All love is a risk

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  • Very descriptive. This is a great metaphor. Very well done.

    Mike


  • csmmoms2
    November 4
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    I can see that you're back. In the crime of poetry, you're a person of special interest.
    -c