I hear your words
I choose to ignore
I hear your words
Always the same as before
What can i say
You don't give me a chance
What can i say
You leave me in defensive stance
You yell
Your words are spears
You yell
Fulfilling my fears
Do you really love me
Or is this life just fake
Do you really love me
Or is there nothing left for me to take
Do you know
How i am going insane
Do you know
Your words are my pain
Author notes
I felt like writing a random poem of how i felt when family yells at me Be as harsh as you want lol it was just a whatever poem
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I felt like writing a random poem of how i felt when family yells at me Be as harsh as you want lol it was just a whatever poem
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Honestly, this was really good. Sometimes you get in arguments with family, and I know it sucks, but in the end it will work out okay.
Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
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wow that was really good... nice job.
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thanks
thanks gives me something to live for lol JK i like your comments did check out my other poem i wrote for my girlfriends birthday thats coming up -
omg!!!
this has to be the best poetry i will ever hear. wow! that was just amazing. keep on writing. -
hit home here
i go through this kinda thing all the time...
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