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Come to Me My Child

Come to me my child.

  Come and sit and talk to me.

Bring Me your problems, let me set you free.

  Sit close my child,lean on me.

 

At night I hear your cries.

  I hear the anguish in your prayers.

Now be be at rest and listen to Me.

  Relax, lay your troubles and fears down.

 

Leave your troubles and fears, and take this peace.

  Leave your concerns, and take this calm.

Leave your pain and take this comfort.

   Leave your worries, and take My hand.

 

For you are My Child .

  Take My hand and stay close to me.

Your place will soon be ready one day with me.

  Come Listen and follow Me.

 

I will be beside you everyday.

  I'll listen as you pray.

Angels will always be close.

  You are one of Mine,  

 

  

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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 16
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    So lovely and sincere. Makes you wonder why we don't stop more often to just listen to Him. Save us a lot of heartaches. Very good.


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    November 5

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    Oh wow this is an amazingly beautiful write and I really enjoyed reading it. You did a marvelous job on this and it's very inspiring (if that's spelled right). Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work!


  • Katie Lazette
    November 5

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    Beautiful and comforting to know we can leave all with Him and find the comfort and joy we seek. He gives unto us His peace. Excellent poem Mac...good luck in the contest.


  • taylorndncar gold member
    November 4

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    mixed messages here involving tenses: past, present and future; of leading and being "beside"; of listening and telling, rather confusing.