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Haikus

Haikus are awesome
but sometimes they make no sense
jumping jellybeans  

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This is one of those things that pop up in my head when i wake up in the middle of the night and cant sleep. lol

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    November 6
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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    The thing about haikus is that they are about nature
    I see that this piece expands on "not making sense" in its final lines. Well done

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