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Sorry Ass Bitch

You son of a bitch with your fucking bitch

I hope you satisfy your need

A sorry ass witch with a filthy itch

and on her cunt you feed

 

Take a switch to that ho ass bitch

bring her to her fucking knees

She's a lying snitch with a nervous twitch

and everyone agrees

 

Telling lies another cries

and you handle the filthy ho

My goodbyes as she supplies

the final blow

 

I am out of here don't shed a tear

you wanted the stupid bitch

Your disguise reveals the lies

you can have the filthy bitch

 

Solution is my final kiss

sent to you on the waves of the sea

Forgotten bliss you caused this

so just....let me fucking be...

 

 

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  • Brook-1 gold member
    November 6

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    What a write. I would not want to make you made at me lol. Thank you for the read and hope you are not wreally hurting.
    Brook


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 5

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    all i can say is what the hell, i mean really, i would hate to be the one to screw you over, strong and empowering in a way, the anger the resolve to just leave, it is all that makes this what it is. a great read, keep it flowing


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 5

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    This is painful to read...yet I feel you shared your feelings openly and with honest justified anger. The wrath of a woman is nothing trivial...and you have certainly proved it here.

    I love you...always~


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 5

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    Wow just Wow. I think whoever drug this out of you sounds like a real winner. I love this your raw passion flowing getting your anger out. I hope that you can find something that will heal you. SH


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 5

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    D@ymnnnn!

    some venomous venting here
    If words are fangs they will strike Vengefully
    raw emotions and angst..to the point for sure
    & ssss


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 4

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    Wow, great way to let it all out! It sucks when the one that you love cheats on you. This is something that a lot of people can relate to unfortunately. I love your straight forwardness in this. Way to go and never let anyone take advantage of your wonderful heart! I wish you well dear!




    Jeremy0826


  • glenn shannon silver member
    November 4

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    geez Tory let it rip you so have a way with venting that its sort of arousing and waes the waves turn sunami ish anyway a good read but i hate you hurting so bless ya glenn

  • Ms.Julie
    November 4
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    outstanding

    honest and emotionally charged


  • Griswold silver member
    November 4

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    Wow, this was a venomous write for sure honey, full of piss and vinegar and not too subtle at all. It doesn't matter what you write you do bring the emotion. I love you baby... Scott


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    November 4
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    Ouch. Nice job though!!! Haha

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