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Hatred

The fallacy of my insidious ways
gave me the revelation alone,
I have become a stark raving mad lunatic
with a malcontent of diligence.

I hate you Death and your putrid ways,
the myriad of feelings the amass
and undulate with in the resistance
of the quagmire of doubt.

The resistance of the opaque colors
give the diligence of the oubliette,
the resilience of time that is intrinsic
revelation full wishing to atone.

The morass of the malcontent
hides amongst those who sell the life
which is now become a part of the
fallacy of death.

Morass with hatred, diligence of time,
soon the kiss of death will be upon us,
life is just a beginning
death is suppose to be an end.

But hatred is the purest form of it all,
dark turns to light then turns back again,
life turns to death, death turns to life,
but can we love it NO we hate it.

Come back with me death for I know you are there
I hate you because you will not embrace me,
I hate life because it will not release me,
time has suddenly stood still.

How I long to see that coffin,
the one that will enfold me in its tender embrace,
lowered into the ground,
safe in the bosom of Death.

 

Your putrid smell is all

of life's hold upon the soul

makes me hate the world 

which cannot hold you dear.

 

Death's embrace holds us 

in it's morbid grip,

the two of them take us to the inevitable end

which no longer holds us close.

Author notes


Prompt 3: Quotes
Choose a quote from below and write your poem based on what the quote inspires.

I hate life for it will not release me
I hate death for it will not embrace me. - Midian


Prompt 2: Word Bank
20 words listed… you must use all words in your poem… any form of the word is okay! You must list the words in your AN in the order you used them so I can be sure you used them all.

Insidious
Revelation
Atone
Raving
Stark
Malcontent
Reservoir
Morass
Diligence
Opaque
Myriad
Amass
Undulate
Resistance
Quagmire
Oubliette
Resilience
Putrid
Intrinsic
Fallacy

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  • Concrete Angel silver member
    November 9

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    Absolutely fantastic use of both prompts! Your background really adds to the intensity of the poem... but bright red always makes my eyes do funny things when I look away from it
    Anyway... every word here just seemed to drip with disdain for death not taking you, but there was almost a pleading feeling to the words as you spoke of longing to be taken by death. I Just love the feel of the whole poem! Excellent write! Thanks for entering and good luck!