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Thinking of You

If I could tell you one thing it would be this:
That your always on my mind.
Every love song reminds me of what we could have had
Every couple holding hands could be us.
Every tear I see or shed reminds me of what you did to me.
Every time you look at her
I think of how that could have been me
I should give up.
I should move on.
But I just can’t.
My head screams, “Let Go, Move On”
but my heart cries, “ I still want you

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  • sanjay kanna
    November 4
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    Ver y nice written!

    I can understand the feelings of you. Emotionally written. Nice to read and the feelings are expressed well. A good job!