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For A Love Unknown

For a love unknown,
I know that you're out there.
I don't know if I've met you,
Or even if we share...

A little piece of history,
A moment that passed by.
We could have only brushed shoulders,
Or have intimacy left behind.

For a love unknown,
I know that you're out there.
I don't know if I've met you,
Or even if we share
That moment.

Let me look in to your eyes,
Let me know how you feel.
Let me see your true smile,
Let me be in that moment with you.

I want to see the world,
Looking through your eyes.
But I can't imagine,
What that would be like.

I can only close my eyes,
And listen to your words.
Try to understand
Nobody's perfect.

For a love unknown,
I know that you're out there.
I don't know if I've met you,
Or even if we share
That moment.

At times, I've heard you,
Calling out in my dreams.
Giving me comfort,
Telling me to wait.

There will come a rainbow,
In the darkest of times.
You don't have to fall down,
And give up on your self.

There will be times,
It hurts to get back up.
Pain will only make you stronger,
So get back up!

For a love unknown,
I know that you're out there.
I don't know if I've met you,
Or even if we share
That wonder.

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Comments


  • Leela
    November 12

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    i like the idea of a true smile. it's not an entirely new idea, but a good one and i'm glad you mention it here. over all i liked it. nice job!


  • Night Rose
    November 4

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    white rose wolf

    I really loved reading this poem it's cute and sweet, and makes me wonder as well have you meet that specail girl great write and i wish you luck in this contest