Shame has no need to bow at honesty’s door;
though open hearts exposed may bleed at times.
Facing directly into the wind builds strength
and hair blown out of place hardly matters.
A contest entry
- PIF Quote Prompt by Riftkin.
700 points, ended November 8, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This was nicely done and captured her completely.
Thank you for that and best of luck to you.
Riftkin
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some great thoughts shared in these few lines. i particularly like your third line.
nicely done.
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AH!
Truth in poetry with a touch of "In your face". (would that be conservative?) I like this poet.
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Excellent
What a great write. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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I like this
Poem, an amazingly strong message in just four lines. True too, facing the wind, does build strength...a cleverly crafted poem.
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