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I wonder if you can hear me where you are.

I've had such a feeling that I could lose myself
  In words that mattered to me and me alone
    And i lost myself, oh you bet I did, I lost
        So much more than I knew I had
   
Because i let myself fall in love
  I let myself go for just that plunge
    And when I hit the ground off of my
        High horse
   
    You didn't love me like I loved you.

I let my butterflies go
  And said my goodbye
      Because the sun was rising
        And I couldn't keep crying.

I'm looking to the sky above.

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  • Hound Of Hell
    November 5

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    im sorry

    people dont realize what they do to people they say they love and really dont.


    • miss keara
      November 6
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      Don't be sorry. Every night spent upset is another lesson learned [:


  • never-look-back
    November 5

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    awwwww, this is sad. ): but really good! i love it!
    favorite parts "Because i let myself fall in love. I let myself go for just that plunge. And when I hit the ground off of my High horse. You didn't love me like I loved you." but it's all amazing! (:

  • FallingRainDrop
    November 5

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    this is really great. it sends out a great message, don't stick with unhappiness, move on. this is really great. love "I let my butterflies go
    And said my goodbye
    Because the sun was rising
    And I couldn't keep crying." great work :]

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