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Moonshine/Secret Plants

I lively up secret plants
and clovers with moonshine.

The sun is my helper
on the other side,
keeping life in all of them,
whilst I sleep.

At night,
the moon as I am
shine on her four wings.

Lady luck - my luck,
her faith - my belief,
my love hers, her love mine.

My knees scraping the streets
we used to roam
because now I fly with one wing only
- my flight is on hope.



Billy Nabeel

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 5

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    Beautiful write. I really enjoyed this. You did an amazing job with this and the picture fits it so well. I really love the very last line... - my flight is on hope. I think it brings it altogether nicely. Great write.