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Don't die on me!

I felt the same pain
I wanted to die
Slit my wrists
My love was a lie

I tried my best
Everything went wrong
They thought I was copying him
What a sad song

Then I gave up
God, this can't be true
But he gave me another chance
He let me meet you

We have much in common
You always come online
People think that you're ugly
But I like you just fine

I forgot about dying
You should too
Seeing that you want to die
I won't let that come true

You have a gentle soul
And your spirit set free
So please hear my cry
Don't die on me!

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  • BloodyRainDrops
    November 6, 2009

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    I promise i won't die on you no matter what


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 5, 2009

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    Oh my goodness. This is sad but full of hope and friendship, I really hope the person this is wrote for sees it. You've done a great job here. Keep on writing and good luck in all you do!