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a Philosophical Quest In the Passenger Chair

As I glare at my reflection
in the rear-view mirror, I wonder:

"...Am I closer
than I appear...?"

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Without anything to do on long trips, strange observations make sense!

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  • tjayrush gold member
    November 17
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    This is very good. The word 'glare' is a great choice. Why are you glaring I wonder?

  • Bob Fox
    November 15
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    That mirror

    How I prayer that it lies to me. But the closer I get the less I tend to look. Oh boy. makes one wonder, to much.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 15
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    this is an awesome well stated fact for you have just inlightened me... and made me smile...for in life we might be closer..but seem not to see the real facts..so we dont pay attention to how close we get to reality.. awesome  bravo!!! hugs hun always ♥♥

    you make me think and this is good

  • suecat
    November 10
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    Ah, yes, I,m still thinking about this...!


  • PurpleAraucana
    November 7

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    glaring self-reflection, eh?

    if you're on a trip,
    better to stare out the window

    a good poem

  • reveller silver member
    November 5
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    I like this

    such a clever few lines, simply great.


  • waydownuponjoy
    November 5

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    your brief thoughts ...

    are astute ... jy

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