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Belittled by birth


They linger long after sex
has blushed my ego brush
away;

this hover of miniature
me - stretched out
and assumed in ignorant
masses.

I blame you;
mother of obese.



 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt:: Strech Marks.


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  • Mango Memories
    November 14
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    this comp has just gotten oh so much harder. hmf.


  • Griswold
    November 4

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    An interesting take on the prompt, i looked at this contest but thought to myself: Self, you are clueless here, those are road maps to nirvana to you , stay out of it... Well done and best of luck... Griz


  • Matt E. Smith
    November 4

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    blame man..it is always our fault lol
    interesting poem--I quite like it.