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All About Love

i'm writing our story
our lives we discover
under a rainbow
while the rain shines
and the sun cries
your beauty fell into my eyes
and my heart
our hands draw an ocean of love
rolling on the sandy beaches
through the autumn leaves
and winter's bitter cold
springtime awaiting birth
and summer's heat
feeling you in all my veins
brilliant meteors
into the night

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  • lucian silver member
    November 6
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    Someone's in love. ^.^


  • PoeticFlame
    November 5

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    awwww honey I could sympathesize with you in this poem. I feel like that w this guy I like but like I said, we have alot to go through before we get to that level. But anyway how are you? I miss talking to you.