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Be At Peace

Since your demise
It’s been unmerciful hell for me
To finally
Be at peace

Life beyond bleak
The days cold and unfulfilling
Dreadful visions
Of your lifeless body suffering
Dying in Prison

Peace an 5 letter word like its next a kin love so hard to obtain
But never ceases to be the deepest source of my pain

Peace the one thing I beg God for more then any other ambition
But no matter how much I plead for someone to listen
Peace in my heart never materializes into existence
Its persistence

To allude leaves me mystified
Discovering life without you is a walking suicide

Memories fade
While painful seconds’ transforms into lonely years
These empty Days
Of the present produces the fears
While my past creates my tears

A decaying spirit burning in a fire known as misery
As I remain trapped from peace
Dead inside spiritually
Yet Physically
The body forces me to breathe

Blinded by my souls agony
But I continue to see
And search for peace
However only god knows
Honestly

Why, when, how, and where I will finally
Be free
To

Finally!

Finally!

Finally!

Father be at peace

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  • bakariU
    November 4
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    Peace

    Just a poem about a young dude trying to find peace I think I got a good sense of display my emotions not your standard peom not set up with a solid pattern but I don't like my words define but certian pattern you can't put pain into pattern you just got to let it flo please give me your honest thoughts I turn my poetry into music and without the peoples honesty I can't create great music thanks in advance