A new town
New family
She starts her life over again
Betrayed by her mother
Taken in by her dad
Another part of her soon to be seen
A new school
With new people
A new circle of friends
Growing closer together
Fitting in to the gang
Slipping into the underground
Old her gone in a flash
Her friends like dealers of joy
More open to difference
She'd happily take the chance
The vivid reality
Dulled by the change
The power of love overcomes all things
She stands a new person a being reborn
What did you think
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Wow, I can relate to this.
"The power of love overcomes all things"
It really does, and I know this from experience. When I'm down, I help someone else. It makes me feel better, it makes me a better person. Although it lacked worded imagery, somehow you managed to paint a very clear picture. I admire that. Great read, thanks for sharing.
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I liked this, an interesting idea, I have a thing about centralised structure, it often puts me off but this seemed to work well My favourite part
'The vivid reality
Dulled by the change'
This has a great flow loved the contrast of 'vivid' and 'dulled', great write! -
Oh wow this was an awesome write. You did really well on this and I loved reading it. Good luck in all you do and as always keep smiling and keep on writing!!
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Good shit bro.
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