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to illustrate

this thing i profess to be

has grievously diverged,

change is mute

 

my articulate voice-

why it searches the past,

the arduous nature

so difficult to read

 

what color could i add

judging this flower by its roots

 

stalking my yet to be dreamed dreams

 

visions give scant advantage 

to know what went before,

speaking the voice i desire to be

 

there is freedom!

 

take sides will jeopardize

my position - be a fool to use it?

 

and devil to despise

 

i ask within

do i have any taste  inside myself

for stones of mothers rich earth,

of fields with morning sounds

 

intersecting history,

adorning fables over fact

 

a glorious collision

 

 

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  Letter 1 "...ask yourself in the most silent hour of your night: must I write?"
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  • JinSays gold member
    November 22
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    yes.
    what Mairi said.
    love,
    jin


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 5
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    OH!


    • Cannonsfire
      November 5
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      Does that mean you got it lol cos Matt obviously struggled lol


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    November 5

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    lovely word choice...
    not entirely sure what you were trying to convey though
    I found it difficult to really take much from it


    • Cannonsfire
      November 5
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      I was being a tad deeper than usual because the prompt says 'ask yourself' why I write...and the collision at the end is the difference between fact and fiction I guess lol but I am glad you were honest about it, thanks

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