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Liquify


let go of inhibitions
leave morals at the door
cast cares along the wayside
they won't be needed here

open sightless eyes
allow sensation free reign

feel the lips that brush the skin
fingernails raking the flesh
throw discretion to the wind
release reality, liquify

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  • Lonesome Dove
    November 18
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    Beautifully written. I love "open sightless eyes, allow sensation free reign"
    Sensations are definately heightened through sightless eyes. Good luck in the contest.


  • ProudMomma
    November 8

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    wow this is beautiful i really enjoyed it...great write and the background makes it pop even more keep on penning!


  • The Voice Of One silver member
    November 4

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    wow, blind loving,, tied up and handless to the warmest touches of a sweet lovers caress.... you know how to make things flow, well done and thank you for entering.


  • PurringKitten silver member
    November 4

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    sighs...Oh my yes!thats the only way to love...throw discretion to the wind release reality, liquify... thank you so much for entering