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Abor-tion




          Though
            my flesh
            has healed
                        these
                  empty arms
                                will
                        never hold
                      the tiny heart
                    I never gave
                      a chance
                to see - me
            face to face




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pain of decision

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 13

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    Wow, it never ceases to amaze me how poets can say so much, in so few words.

    Powerful write my friend, and congrats on the trophy.

    mj.


  • crivanea silver member
    November 5

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    what a poem that tenderly speak of a topic so raw....congrats on the silver


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 4

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    So sad but brilliant!

    mystic


  • raw love
    November 4
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    I really like this. well done.

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