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I Was Alone.

...I was alone.
Lost in a game of hide and seek,
unable to find myself in a silent place.
I've fought for so long,
I don't even recognize myself anymore.

What have I become without you?

After a while, my blindness got the
better of me.
Like a dying beast,
I began to lay my weary body down.

But just when I had given up,
the light came to me through the trees,
and I grasped it like the breath of life,
the storm in the drought.

I'm saved.
Life is returning to these jaded limbs.

♥

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  • nous. gold member
    November 27
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    yes a small fraction of hope! make me breathe again haha. of course the light did it=p & wow i think we can tell im getting tired, i think i'm somehow kind remaining on topic. -blabing. Lol wow


  • w.o.n.d.e.r.w.a.l.l
    November 24
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    this is amazing. i love it.


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 6

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    "I'm saved.
    Life is returning to these jaded limbs." I'm glad to hear you have a more optimistic look on life now Loved the poem cookie buddy!


    -Steve-


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 4
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    Oh wow. I love this. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.