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Weave

Missing image
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Celestial bodies skim by covered ears
whispering truths to naive cells.
Slipping honey covered tongues
down my soul, into visions denied.

Golden strands bind to alpha hand
curiosity perches delicately
on the lazy lids of an omnipotent muse
as her fluid skin covers abstract notions
of forever and love.

Formless epiphanies surface and pivot...
She gazes amused at new smiles from old souls
her work was done centuries ago
it plays out like a marionette show... again.
We inhale the perfume of familiarity
Woven fixedly here... now... then... always.


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Author notes

picture prompt/ 50-100 words/1 hour
Picture credit goes to: http://elenadudina.deviantart.com/art/La-llamada-142511804

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    November 5

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    Now, THIS is it.
    Good luck, and thank you again.


    • cybilseyes silver member
      November 6
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      Thank you for shuffling me to your finalists! It's an honor to be among the such brilliant company!

    • cybilseyes silver member
      November 5
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      Lol Glad you like it.. love that statement! Thank you for having non-cliche prompts it makes it a lot easier to submit my work without the trappings of juvenile phrasing and immature vocabulary!

  • Great write. Loved it. Good luck in the contest!

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