A golden splash behind the trees
a nicely added touch,
as all the leaves to scatter here
beneath the canopy.
My dreams will wander here a bit
but dreams still fade away,
the home is all too picturesque
as winter comes again.
Author notes
simply playing with meter and line lengths...
Let me know How this makes you feel, what do you think?
Comments
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This poem fits the scene together nicely, like a painting of a winter cottage complete with frame. The first two lines are so inviting in the way they open up the rest of the poem.
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These verbal splashes of glitzy gold sure can paint a beautiful canvas image of tranquility my friend! Sounds and feels spot on to my heart and ear. Nice work.
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Thank you Suseann!!
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