The devil is not one entity with
two horns and a tail like it
was thought to be. But demons,
on the other hand, can process
the heart and soul of man.
Evil demons are for real
and works on the way people feel.
Results reveal its behavior
is very different from that
of a savior.
The eye can detect evil;
it's not hard when you try. To
not see evil, one must be blind
or, better yet, out of one's mind
Good is easier still because it
goes by what one feels good will
always make you smile it will
last for awhile. .
God made our bodies and minds
very simple. Feelings are the perfect
example. What feels good is good;
what feels bad is bad. In most cases
you can depend on that. But It's not
always a fact
The face worn by the human race
will always let all know what's taking
place. Honesty is all we need to
see what's meant to see
Evil is growing is what I
see, even when others smile
at me. I hope what I see
going on. is not right but
absolutely wrong.
What do you think about this?
Comments
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wow the flow is amazing though im not sure if the scheme was not there.. Im inlove with how you expressed yourself here very interesting to read the flow made me excited to read more. Go tauruses...lol im a taurus too I guess we are all natural artist in everything
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What?! No comments! I must say this poem leaves an impression that is for sure. It also makes me want to read it over and over to make sure I understand what it is that you are saying and everytime that I do I discover something that I did not see previously and I just love poetry like that! The way you stated that feelings are the perfect example seems to have more than just one meaning behind it. Mainly because we seem to over complicate what it is that we are feeling to hide the actual point behind the feelings. If that makes the slightest sense to you lol.
Another thing that I enjoyed about your poem is that though you talk of God and the Devil you do not do it in a preachy way which to me is always a plus! Very nicely written!
Maggie 
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