Gravity's fingers are broken--air lifts, lungs breathe again--even after believing they were broken, crushed and collapsed. Sweet oxygen surrounds, fills, caresses tenderly with love...
and I can see you.
Inhale and interlace with me, angelic perfection; we've got songs to sing. Chains and heavy heartache were our captives of separation, but now we are whole. Distance is deadly, anxiety is grasping, but I will take your hand and lead you from there. Yes, love--I'm reaching out to you after ages of clenching my fists and shadowing my eyes, only dreaming of your memory.
Time poisons me every once in a while, and this withdrawal is like heroin's...but you know that I'll endure this torture so that I may harmonize with you once more. Sweet addiction, I cannot pull myself away. Flawless angel, you've captivated again. Your heart is a melody that cannot be sung, or else the sky would break and the earth would hold its breath and
suffocate.
Breathe in this reunion and embrace me again, dearheart...because you still have all of me.
Author notes
I love being reunited with old friends... <3
Just a short-and-sweet little poem dedicated to my lovely Amanda.
Tell me no more lies.
Comments
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I really love this piece, everything was just amazing, i am speechless, an amazing write O.O great job!
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This piece almost makes me wanna cry. I too can relate because (as you know) I'm seeing a friend I have not seen for months and I know that the short time I have with her will be priceless.
I think this is beautiful just as is... I can't find anything to edit. Maybe add more but change nothing.
I love the Gravity's fingers personification, maybe work with that more? Perfect way to start it.
Great job darling -
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I was going to add more to it, but it was one of those "omg MUHST WRYT NAO!" kind of things. lol. I'm glad you like it.
It's cool because many of the phrases, like the very first stanza, came from a poetic conversation that we had yesterday. We literally wrote stuff like that. I copied + pasted the first one, and the other ones hinted at the conversation and stuff...so yeah. ^_^
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