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Swords

Symbols of honor,
Recognizing brave,
Courageous, loyal,
Trustworthy, and
The heroes.

Faithfullness in you
Disintegrates
The sword is pointed

Turning into rage,
Anger, hatred.
Blood is now shed,
Pain is among us,
The victims.

Here you're the enemy
Wanting a fight
My traitor

As you raise it up,
I step back again
And while I do that,
My true companians
Protect me.

Their swords are clean
No blood, no slaughter
Just a devout bond, unbreakable





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  • wilcat1
    November 7

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    I have read a few of your poems, and I liked what I read. If you had not told your age, I would have thought you much older. I apologize for that. Life does not age discriminate. Your poetry is beautiful. Personally, I think you should continue. Good luck


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 5

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    Love the last stanza, it was a perfect way to end it. I also think the background goes well with what you've written. Thank you for sharing this here and good luck in all you do.