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[ In the moments before dawn ]

In the moments before dawn
I wake to find you watching me
Not a looming that I mind
For you are my lover
My best friend forever
A gental kiss upon my head

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This is something that I wrote on the spot... I hope it doesn't suck.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 9
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    aww very sweet

    Thanks for entering & best of luck