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The Taste Test

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the subject was asked to taste
the products before him placed
and report which he liked without haste
so for this taste test he braced

he tasted the products and thought
which is the best one he sought
so he took another sip as he ought
which of the two would he have bought

he studied each delicate flavor
his third sip, he was feeling much braver
one brew was recieving his favor
and now made his mind without waiver

the can that he picked was Old Style
t'was the brand that was making him smile
the second can he found a bit vile
but the first brand made it worthwhile

the test giver was now in a fog
last taster thought Old Style ill grog
next taster in line was a dog
no more for the squirrel and the frog


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Using Picture Prompt on this link-- http://allpoetry.com/contest/2465753

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  • suecat
    November 14
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    Hey, this reminds me of me when I did a taste test between Guinness and my favourite Sth Aussie Coopers Stout! Very funny - the poem, I mean - although so was I after the taste test! I still prefer Coopers.

  • PureCountry
    November 10
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    Forgot These Fellows!!!

  • PureCountry
    November 10
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    Well In My Opinion,

    just on sure humor and geniousness of creativity, the trophy should have been gold. But alas it waas not. I found it wonderful in rhytmic flow, and abounding with mirth. Well Done!!!

    PureCountry


  • amnouup
    November 10
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    Very funny

    Very funny poem with hidden message, it flows very fine and captivates attention from first to last, nice work :-)
    best wishes,
    Mou


  • ZachP gold member
    November 5

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    This is so cute, Dennis~
    and wonderful for a chuckle!
    You've captured the prompt
    in your own brilliant style~

    congratulations on your HM.
    Best wishes,
    Zach Estel
    s


  • funpum
    November 5

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    How many had you had when you wrote this Dennis!!!

    Aaah.. I commented without seeing the picture, now it makes sense! This new system of sending poes out by e-mail may not be working...

    In the last line of verse two, it should be 'have bought' .

    Made me smile Dennis!


  • Ez Writer silver member
    November 4
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    A very funny poem luv the rhyme & flow !
    Thank you for your entry ...

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