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Life

Life can be nice like honey and spice,
But all of that comes with a very big price.
With hard work and plans you can claim this prize.

Here is where the real truth lies.
Today's pain may be tomorrow's gain.
Because there is always sunshine after the rain.
Aim for the sky,
And hold your head high,
'Cause you never know your break is nigh.

Don't turn to drugs,
Or even to mug,
'Cause your grave you would have already dug.
Always remember Christ and things will be fine.
He is the light that shines,
At the end of this tunnel of mine.

This goes to show
That the way you will go,
Will only be determined by the roads you've chose.
Life is not predestined,
Which will make it all the more  interesting.

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Life is what we make it so don't complain about your problems. Just work hard and you will make it.

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  • Un-Found
    November 25
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    Wow

    Lines one to four are amazing.

    One of the best christian poems I've read lately


    • Kazunan
      November 26
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      We've got to keep going regardless of our struggles. No sense in being a pessimist. I believe anything is achievable if we are willing to work hard enough to get it & keep it. Thanks for your comment.


  • ciara12
    November 17

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    wow, the emotion in this is so raw and i really really loved this part:.
    "This goes to show
    That the way you will go,
    Will only be determined by the roads you've chose."

    this is a very good piece...
    great penning
    Forever and Always
    Ciara♥


  • Aalta
    November 16

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    A very optimistic note...

    loved these lines :
    Because there is always sunshine after the rain.
    Aim for the sky,
    And hold your head high,
    'Cause you never know your break is nigh.

    Thank you for sharing this

    -Aalta


    • Kazunan
      November 17
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      Thank you for your comment. I like optimism, maybe it's because I love to smile and see other people smile.

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