Winning the heart
with a stunningly worded verse
is more important to me now
What should I do then
I should make my self available
and feel nerve of people living around
and hear about their dreams
and strive hard to realize them
which are considered and only found reasonable.
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Comments
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I like this piece as it gives that afterthought to me - the realization. However, the second stanza seems to be rich in the beginning and ended up hanging. If it is intentional as an effect it wasn't effective for me. Just my thought.
Other than that, the piece is simple and makes an individual ponder.
Thanks and regards,
Hensley
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